I’m back in my room now. There was another junior thunderstorm, but it was right overhead. Some of you asked for photos, and I couldn’t get them. It shook the windows, but didn’t have the staying power of yesterday’s storm.
I also bought some ski-lodge quality slippers for my wife and daughter. Today is Old What’s Her Face’s birthday, and we exchanged texts and spoke on the phone. Seems to happen every year that work sends me out of town on her birthday. She already bought her own present, and the slippers are just for fun.
I had to attend a midday event, and wound up with some time to myself this afternoon. I have to go to a banquet this evening, but a couple of hours in between were well spent time.
The Hat is a finished draft. It came in at 25,500 words. My intent was to publish it as a novella, but my personal idea of a novella is 30K. Word count numbers seem to be pretty fluid. Am I worrying about something that doesn’t really matter?
There is a lot going on in this story. I demonstrated Lizzie’s symbiosis with the hat by having them play the upright bass together. He has all of the skills, but none of the arms and fingers. This is how they fight evil, by working together.
I’m a bit worried about the denouement part of the book. I have a lot of loose ends to tie up, and currently, I’ve done it using my bass clef section breaks. I have the aftermath of the big fight, the replacement (and upgrading) of musical instruments, the demonstration that complex characters will go forward together. That last part means as musicians and as fighters of evil.
I don’t like long denouements. I once beta read for an author who spent a quarter of the book defining a happy-ever-after for her characters. This included naming grandchildren that hadn’t been born to children that hadn’t been conceived in the main story.
I know I’m not that bad, but I still worry. If I eliminate some things that are dear to me, I could probably turn this into a dynamite short story. I want a novella and those parts are important to me.
If I turn each necessary bit of closure into an entire chapter, that will help with word count, but it will also push me toward the long denouement I’m trying to avoid.
Any suggestions?
I’m fairly sure either my critique group, or a couple of decent beta readers can help me out, but I’m not ready for betas yet. I have several passes to make before I can share it with betas.
Okay, I know someone is going to ask. Here are the slippers. I think those dingle balls are going to be Frankie bait though. They should be cozy on our new floor.
Keep thinking of LOTR with all the endings. Got silly after a bit. Not really sure what to suggest though. Guess say whatever needs to be said and be brief?
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I’ve kind of done that, and I like it. Maybe someone out there can teach me a new trick.
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Maybe. Honestly, I think there are only so many tricks for endings. Many thing you need is closer.
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Sorry, can’t decipher that last line. It’s a buddy story, so both of them need some closure in the end.
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Wow. I’m not even sure what I wrote there. Auto-correct just wrecked me. Something about closure? I’d like to say I was drinking at the time, but I haven’t reach that point of my night.
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Better start. I’m about to go down to a mixer and a banquet myself. Pulling my boots on in about 15 min.
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Well, I definitely shouldn’t be near the new book. Figure I just got the cover art and final edits for the next release, so I’ll call that my author victory for the night. Have fun at the mixer.
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That’s a good victory. I haven’t even contacted Sean about art. This one wrote itself pretty fast.
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It seems to have flown by. Feels like it wasn’t so long ago that you first came up with the idea.
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Idea’s been there a long time. I just didn’t talk about it much. It wrote fast, and that’s usually a good sign.
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Means you were really into it. When were you thinking of releasing it?
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Don’t know. Early 18?
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Plenty of time to make some awesome promos.
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Those slippers are called Muc Luks – or they used to be, anyway: very heavy crocheted socks with flexible leather soles. I have two pairs as well and I love them both. I even sleep in the pair I keep cleaner when the heat isn’t working (yeah, I rent). My mother started us out as kids. THE. BEST. Great present.
xx,
mgh
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Thanks, Madelyn. My Acorn slippers are similar, so I know how comfy they are. Mine just aren’t quite so pretty. They liked them so I guessed well.
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What’s not to like? 🙂
xx,
mgh
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I dislike rushed endings. Take your time to wrap things up well.
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Good to know, thanks.
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Hate to say this but it is your novella and you should keep what you treasure.
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I will, but there may be a way to make it better.
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Of course there is.
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Knit slippers like those are the BEST 🙂
I’m impressed with the speed of your progress!
I don’t really care about word count when I read, and if you’re self-publishing, does it even matter? Write it exactly how you want it to be read.
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Now that is a rockstar answer. I have time to learn a new trick though, so I’m keeping my options open.
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Always keep the options open 🙂
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Cutting our darlings is never easy. Hopefully that’s where the betas will help you. But I know when we’re not quite ready for betas it’s tricky to know what to let go. Guess instinct has to be our guide. Not much help with that one, was I? 😄 Oh well, good luck!
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Not much, but it’s nice to have someone understand.
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Those are some since slippers! I am ready for fall and warm slippers! I try not to focus on the word count until I am completely done. I figure each story has a mind of its own.
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I’m so with you on word count. I also believe there is a market for shorter works and want a couple of novellas out there. I think my family will like the slippers.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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I have recently decided to forget about word counts, as it was starting to haunt me. I’ll get the work the way I like it, which is hard enough… and let it go…
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I think each story will be as long as it needs to be. Writing short fiction taught me that. I feel that way about novels, short stories, and even micros. I tend to write pretty sparse, so there could be room for a bit more.
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I wouldn’t say that your writing is sparse, but I know mine is. Everything I write is far too short. Something I am trying hard to improve!
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Happy Anniversary to your wife! May you both enjoy a healthy and joyful life!
The slippers look funny but useful on cold weather.
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Thank you, Carmen. We didn’t get the ten inches of snow that was predicted, but it’s cold enough now. It was 90 degrees on Monday.
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Those slippy-bootees are wonderful! 😀
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I’ve worn the Acorn slippers for decades. They’re wool and my family would never put up with the itchy feel. These are something soft and comfy, and prettier than rag wool. They look similar though.
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The slippers look heavenly.
I don’t have an idea about the ending, but I’ll think about it. I agree that overly long wrap-ups are a letdown, but I prefer all the ends closed rather than a brief summation and then goodbye. I wouldn’t worry about length. And I also bet you’re worried about nothing.
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Thanks. That’s why we’re supposed to place them aside for a few weeks. I have some ideas, but I need to read a few books between now and then.
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This probably isn’t very helpful, but you have to do what feels right for the story. Some stories work best with quick endings, others need you to go in to a lot more detail about what happened afterwards, and others are somewhere in the middle. So do what feels right, and hope your beta readers agree with you.
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I agree. I also agree that it’s okay for the betas to disagree. That’s why we use them. Right now I need to let it rest for a while.
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I’m impressed you managed to finish the first draft of The Hat already. You’re really on a roll. I have two short releases out int he area of 21-22K that I consider novellas. With the word count you have, I definitely consider you in novella range.
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I appreciate that. I think it’s good to offer various lengths to appeal to a broader base. No idea what to price them at, but that’s far down the road.
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Anything over 20K words is a novella, so like everyone has said, you should finish the story to your own satisfaction.
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Sound advice. Word count isn’t that big of a deal. How I wrap things deserves some thought.
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