Old What’s Her Face is still working nights. This meant another day of keeping everyone quiet so she could sleep a bit.
We had breakfast together again, then she unwound for an hour before heading for bed.
Quiet time is great for authors. I worked through the previous segment of Serang, then started writing again. Today’s effort came to about 3600 words. Something else wonderful happened too. At 75,000 words, it came to the end. Serang is now a first draft.
I fiddled with the new part for a few hours, then sent it to my critique partners. Next weekend I’ll look at all the critique suggestions, then may start my editing passes. It’s best to put it aside and look with fresh eyes, but the first chapters are months old to my eyes. I can do all my word searches on weeknights.
Honestly, I nearly made it. I wanted it out before school ends, but it wasn’t meant to be. This might turn into a November release now.
I’m torn about sharing this, because it’s going to be so long before anyone can actually read it. A peek at the cover might whet someone’s reader brain, so here it is:
This one is a companion piece to Voyage of the Lanternfish, but is quite a bit more serious. Serang is a serious character and deserves to be treated accordingly.
The weird part is our weather. We had a drizzle of rain when I got up, followed by sunshine, then thunder and lightning, then more sun, then a torrential downpour, wind, sun, another downpour, a hailstorm, sun, another hailstorm, and it’s sunny right now. Who knows what the rest of the day will bring. Maybe something cool like a haboob. Mostly I just like saying haboob, it’s probably too wet out there for one.
I think I’ll probably spend tomorrow getting acquainted with The Viral Blues once more. I put this aside in a misguided attempt to get Serang published before summer. Don’t know if I’ll do more writing on it, but it could happen.
Either that or I’ll scope out some old movies. John Wayne will probably be winning World War Two somewhere for Memorial Day. Hope everyone has a lovely holiday tomorrow.
Guaranteed to find John Wayne War pictures on this weekend. Enjoy the holiday.
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You too, thanks.
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Congrats on finishing your draft. I love the cover. Actually emailed you something about it.
Happy Memorial Day.
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Thanks, Staci, you too. I love your idea.
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Congrats, Craig!
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Thank you, Traci.
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You’re welcome, Craig!
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I like the cover. Enjoy the movies.
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Thanks, Charles. Looks like the zoo was fun.
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It was a blast. Wore me out due to the heat though.
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We had every kind of weather you can imagine here today.
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The cover looks great. I could hear the wrap whoop from here.
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Thanks, John. Still not ready for public consumption, but a major milestone.
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Know how it is.
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Congrats on finishing your first draft AND having your cover ready! I’m going to sound dorky, but Serang’s a girl. Did girls have to shave their heads to study with masters? I know the Avatar (the kids’ cartoon I loved) was shaved clean. Just wondering. Sigh. And now I have to wait a LONG time before I can buy the book. But congrats on finishing it.
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Yes, the students at the temple shaved. I remember that cartoon.
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Congratulations on finally having the first draft completed! Good luck with the next phases, and with getting the other story to the same point.
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I’ll always take luck, thanks. Writing time is fleeting, so I try to maximize it when it comes around.
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Congratulations on finishing the draft! Cool cover too. 🤗
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Thank you, and glad you like it.
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Great that you finished a first draft!
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Congrats on finishing the first draft of Serang’s story!!! I love the cover. It is colorful and tells a lot! Happy Memorial Day to you, Craig!
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Serang is an awesome character. I’m so glad you decided to give her a book of her own. Congratulations on finishing her story and on that colorful, eye-catching cover!
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I hope it’s well received. My concern is it won’t include the comedy that came with Lanternfish. The timeline is wrong for that, and she’s a serious character.
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I like what you did with her. She has depth.
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That’s true. Makes me hopeful.
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Congrats on finishing the first draft, Craig! Weird weather up your way. We haven’t had rain for weeks – all of the storms seem to be missing us.
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Looks like we’re getting a reprieve for a few days. It feels good to finish a project, but it needs to go on the shelf for a while now.
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You never cease to amaze. Huge congrats on finishing the draft! Look forward to another rocket-launching release from you this fall.
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Thank you. I’ll need to step back somewhere around August and get ready for promo.
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It’s a great cover!
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Thanks, glad you like it.
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Well done on finishing your book, Craig. It is really tough to work nights.
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She had a rough weekend. We both might take a breather this weekend.
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Thank you, Traci.
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